Don't be so hard on yourself. These are supposed to be snapshots, not masterpieces. Besides, this is a perfect snapshot. It has lots of little details that lead to questions, like what's the chart on the screen? What's the ViewMaster red thing? What is the picture on the little calendar? Who is the person looking at the big calendar? You're not supposed to answer these questions, but the snapshot is supposed to raise them, and it does. I like it.