Profile update

[urbpan]

I recently altered my profile, removing references to my print zines, explaining the 365 project, and a short note about Pantheism. If those of you who read and care about lj profiles could take a look and let me know if it's coherent and complete, I'd be grateful.

Comments

[cottonmanifesto.livejournal.com]

If you only want to read these, and not my more general posts about life and movies and politics and such, look for the 365-urban-species tag and click it. If you want to see ones from long ago, you'll have to go to my archives and go through day by day.

???

link to the post with all of them collected?

[urbpan.livejournal.com]

Oh, right, I don't need that anymore. Thanks!

[cottonmanifesto.livejournal.com]

make the comment text read # readers comments please :)

[by-steph.livejournal.com]

It looks good!

[twistedapple.livejournal.com]

looks good.

[broken-angel.livejournal.com]

" If you want to know more about pantheism, go here. "

The link is on the word "pantheism" rather than the word "here." Other than that it looks great!

[ankhanu.livejournal.com]

The linking has been addressed, and the textual content looks just fine to me.

my 2 cents

[plantgirl.livejournal.com]

You have good info, but it's organized oddly. To make it clearer, I would re-order the paragraphs in the following way.

1. Hello!
2. This year I am doing ... 365
3. Cottenmanifesto & I are married
4. For money (not much)
5. On pantheism ...
6. Sometimes I trade stuff

A lot of people will be linking to you for the 365 species project, so putting it near the top makes their life simpler. What I numbered as 3 & 4 could easily switch, as it's general personal info. The pantheism helps explain why you do the work you do, so I put it after the job description, but it can swap with the swapping section (couldn't resist that one).

Oh, and I'd put your counter at the bottom of the page, or possibly before the trading stuff. It acts as a divider, and you don't need/want one there.

Re: my 2 cents

[nevers.livejournal.com]

i agree that i would expect the 365 info to come first.

[ndozo.livejournal.com]

Par 3: do you want amphibian to be plural"
Par 3: when you talk about articles and updates, do you want to say where these have appeared?
Par 5, line 4: cold should be could
Par 6, line 4: conciousness should be consciousness
Make sure you have a good reason for capitalizing "universe."

Other than that it seems fine.

[g-weir.livejournal.com]

Weren't you a Rag Editor once? No room for that in the profile? I mean, isn't that where you first learned the importance of spelling, syntax, style and some other thing?

--G